Editing, Or Putting a Chopped Onion Back Together Again


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So I wrote my first romantic horror novella in July, and I plan on pitching it to a few editors in a few weeks. That means it’s time to edit like a crazy woman. Whenever I edit, I imagine I’m putting a chopped onion back together again because I’m adding the layers (character, plot, setting, dialog) to make a complete story. Each layer has to fit together just so to make the perfect whole.

You may not hear from me much while I hunker down and fling onion pieces around. But I’ll soon be finished and smelling like dinner!

6 thoughts on “Editing, Or Putting a Chopped Onion Back Together Again

  1. Reminds me of a scene from a great movie:
    Shrek: Ogres have layers. Onions have layers. You get it? We both have layers.
    Donkey: Oh, you both have LAYERS. You know, not everybody like onions. What about cake? Everybody loves cake!
    Shrek: I don’t care what everyone else likes! Ogres are not like cakes.

    If the onion layering doesn’t work out, maybe you should try baking it into a cake.

    Have I read this story? Romantic horror? Jeesh, I’d remember that!

    P

  2. J – It’s called Salt In the Cupboard, and no, I didn’t put it through CC because of time restraints. I did have a trusty beta read it though.

    Stef – I’m not crying. Yet, anyway. 😀

    Pam – I’d love to be creamy and smooth like a cake, but I’m not. I’m all awkward because I can’t stay on top of the counter without rolling off. Like an onion. See? No, you haven’t read this story but hopefully you will soon!

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